Gwen The Brave Hen
In a smelly swamp there lived a hen called Gwen. She laid six beautiful eggs in her nest. A hawk came by. “What’s this I see?” he said to himself. Oh I see now, it’s a nest with a hen and eggs. Yum eggs for me.” After that she got angry and she shooed the hawk away. At last she sat and sat and sat until… crack six beautiful chicks came out. And that was the end of the egg eating pest. Gwen was very, very, very happy.
In a smelly swamp there lived a hen called Gwen. She laid six beautiful eggs in her nest. A hawk came by. “What’s this I see?” he said to himself. Oh I see now, it’s a nest with a hen and eggs. Yum eggs for me.” After that she got angry and she shooed the hawk away. At last she sat and sat and sat until… crack six beautiful chicks came out. And that was the end of the egg eating pest. Gwen was very, very, very happy.
Recount by Alicia
Room 3
St Pius School
22 April 2010
3 comments:
Alicia, I like the way you have used direct speech to make your writing so interesting.
I look forward to reading your next recount.
Thank you Mrs Pole for sending your lovely comment. I like writinf and I worked hard at making my story interesting.
By Alicia
very instetrsting writing alecia i like how you got your story into order. alecias mum.
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